11. Challenge the last paragraph. Does it leave the reader satisfied?
12. Challenge every line that you love. Too much telling and not enough showing?
13. Do you really need those exclamation points? The dialogue should be emphasis enough.
14. Rethink underlined and italicized words. They should stand on their own.
15. Be alert for every cliched word or phrase, every overused or unnecessary modifier.
Hope these help. The last five will be published soon! (Yes, I needed that exclamation point)
