I'm still working on revisions. In order to get a better feeling of setting as a character, I researched small CA towns, and came up with a composite of three. I want Hannigan's Cove to feel as real as the town you live in.
I'm working on action tags, description, and the five senses. I realize that some plot additions are necessary. For most writers, the process of creating is not a one-time through, but a "layering" of the different elements that make a good story. Don't feel like your first draft has to be perfect. It won't be, unless you're a genius beyond anything that's been seen in the literary world to date. Enjoy each step.